Helena Bertinelli (![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
shadeofviolent) wrote2011-02-08 08:28 pm
shadeofviolent) wrote2011-02-08 08:28 pm
HMD
How's my driving?
Tell me what you think of Huntress if you will! Is she IC? Is she interacting at a good pace? Did she reference something that you really don't think is appropriate? Just drop me a line and maybe we can work things out!
All the comments are screened and if you wanna anon, that's cool too! IP logging's off after some struggling with the LJ settings 8D;
If you're going to anon, though, I'd appreciate if you could turn on thread tracking. I tend to ask a lot of questions in regards to crit and I get amazingly nervy when I'm stuck in that vague pit of "oh dear god, something's wrong, but I don't know how to fix it" and I can't get clarification.
That said, thanks so much for the crit!
Tell me what you think of Huntress if you will! Is she IC? Is she interacting at a good pace? Did she reference something that you really don't think is appropriate? Just drop me a line and maybe we can work things out!
All the comments are screened and if you wanna anon, that's cool too! IP logging's off after some struggling with the LJ settings 8D;
If you're going to anon, though, I'd appreciate if you could turn on thread tracking. I tend to ask a lot of questions in regards to crit and I get amazingly nervy when I'm stuck in that vague pit of "oh dear god, something's wrong, but I don't know how to fix it" and I can't get clarification.
That said, thanks so much for the crit!